Sunday, January 26, 2014

Explaining My Topic.

 In your first paragraph, explain your research topic and preliminary findings to a friend (or sibling, parent, etc.). 

So, I'm doing this project in school, and it's basically me finding a topic that falls under the theme of rights and responsibilities. Now my topic is based on the Civil Rights Movement. I have to research this topic thoroughly, and kind of narrow it down so that it isn't to broad of a topic. I know it sounds, and it is, complicated. So I narrowed mine down to segregation in the south (Alabama seems to be the best location); Public Transportation, Voting Rights, and Basic Social Equality. It was difficult narrowing my choices down, but I was able to choose these three, because they cover the points that I want to get across to any chosen audience. So the project guidelines say that I have to have a final project, and on that part I'm still trying to decide. But, this is basically what I have to do for my project. 

explain your topic again more formally, like you might in a paper or a formal class presentation. 

For my NHD project, I chose to focus on the Civil Rights Movement. Now not the whole entire movement, but mainly three specific aspects of it, that I found to be most important. Once I narrowed my topic down, I ended up with a thesis: Transportation, Education, and Basic Social Equality were some of the main focuses when it came to what were big priorities during this time, that influenced the Civil Rights Movement to start. I chose these three, because they manage to capture important parts of the movement within them. I also find the events that occurred within these categories to be very interesting, so I guess that's just a plus to my topic. Now there's the process of choosing a final project to use, for presenting your project. Making videos always interested me, so that may just be my final project selection, but then again I haven't decided yet. 

1 comment:

  1. I think your project has a lot of promise. Keep working on formal voice. You will want to avoid colloquial and casual expressions like "now," "when it came to," and "a plus" when you are writing formally.

    ReplyDelete